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Friday, October 23, 2020

the mysterys

 

have you ever?writen hi my nmae is ollie and this is my story of missing people if you have i need to improve on please write it down below

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ollie
    I have done some writing simalar to the writing too make sure you cheek your spelling.

    Isaac

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  2. hi my name is Layla from Ahipara school,
    maybe next time you can add more pictures
    and check your spelling.
    Keep it up

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