have you ever?writen hi my nmae is ollie and this is my story of missing people if you have i need to improve on please write it down below
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, October 23, 2020
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Ollie
ReplyDeleteI have done some writing simalar to the writing too make sure you cheek your spelling.
Isaac
hi my name is Layla from Ahipara school,
ReplyDeletemaybe next time you can add more pictures
and check your spelling.
Keep it up