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Friday, October 16, 2020

pharaoh

 

have you ever imagend you were a pharoh?hi my name is ollie and this is my slide if i was a pharoh and my 10 rules if i was a pharoh if i have anything i need to improve on pleasewrite it down below

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Ollie
    this is a really got piese of writing of what you would to if you were a pharaoh/leader of the ancient Egyptians make sure that you put captial letters at the start of a sentence and make sure you have spaces in between words

    Isaac

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