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Thursday, September 24, 2020

NZ sign language


do you know sign language?hi my name is Ollie and this is my video of sign language this took me one dat to finish if you have anything i have to improve on please write it down below
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2020 at 9:53 AM

    Hi Ollie
    Your video looks great maybe next time you can show your face. I can´t really see the hand make sure you have spaces and check your spelling also make sure you have capital letters at the start of sentences. Isaac

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2020 at 11:37 AM

    Hi Ollie,
    Your video looks really cool and very neat. It didn't look liked you messed anything up so that's a plus. Next time for an extra challenge, you could do your first and last name. It will be very interesting to see how long it takes someone to learn their first and last name at the same time. At the start of your paragraph you haven't used a capital letter for where it is needed. Next time you could check you punctuation. But other than that Good Job!

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