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Friday, November 26, 2021

In The Night

 

 
Have you ever written a story? Hi bloggers my name is Ollie and this is my piece of writing that I did in class it's not finished yet it is a story about a missing child. It has taken me two days to write where im up to. I think it's going to be a really good story when it is finished. If you think the two chapters I've written are good please write them in the comments below. Thanks for reading.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Ollie i like your story it was very good but maybe next time you can add a little more writing

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