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Friday, July 3, 2020

my comic

have you writen a comic before?hi my name is ollie and this is my comic slide i made this comic in one week its about were monsters come to life out of books i was inspired by goosenump to do this theme if i have anything to improve on please write it in the comment.
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  1. AnonymousJuly 24, 2020 at 10:50 AM

    Hello Oliver, I am Nicholas from Waikowhai Primary School. Cool comic And no I have not written a comic before. Don't forget to make your first word have a capital letter. I like how you have asked for people to comment with feedback so you can get better. Occasionally you miss words or use the wrong words.
    Here is my blog if you are intrested https://wpsnicholasco.blogspot.com/
    Blog ya latter

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