Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, July 30, 2021
Amazing Basketball
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Hi Ollie,Your post was really good and I like how you put in pictures of your games. I think that you should make sure to add in punctuation in your description because it's a little bit confusing to read, maybe if you made your pictures a bit smaller and closer together and had your writing either on top or underneath it would look a bit better. Good job on your games, sounds like you did well.
ReplyDeleteHi ollie Its ben here nice blog ya got there. how ,many games did you win and how many did you play. seeya i'm out.
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