do you know about flamangois? hi im ollie and this is my slide on flamngois it took me about an hour to do if oyu have any thing i need to improve on please write it down below.
Tuesday, February 16, 2021
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Hi Ollie, Thanks for sharing your flamingo's slide, I like how you included a question in your description. Maybe next time you could add in why you did this slide, was it for writing or reading? You could also maybe try presenting it in another way like adobe spark or canva, One last thing is you should make sure you check your spelling and punctuation before you post. When I was in Korimako last year I remember doing a task like this in Literacy with Mrs Atkinson. Have a nice holiday!
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