have you ever made a civilisatoin?hi my name is ollie and at school ive been making a civilisatoin its tooken me 2 weeks to make if you have anything i need to imporove please write it down below
Friday, November 27, 2020
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hi ollie i like your postand i really like your game i hope you do more cool slides:)
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ReplyDeleteThis Is a really good slide here is some thing I want to know abit more infomation like how will you make your moats dams houses? You also need to put some infomation on you transport also what is the name of your language? Where is your civilization in fiji? it looks abit plain without a background maybe add one? because we are presenting our civilization slides to your homebase and your teacher miss smith